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Lauren
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Wrote this during COVID, I remastered the song and added a few touches to it

Tbh not a big fan of the lyrics, but the melody works out surprisingly
Released: 19-May-2024
Category: Rock
Application: Logic Pro
File type: m4a
File size: 11.7 Mb
Plays: 11
Downloads: 0
Weekly plays: 1
Weekly downloads: 0
License: Non-commercial derivatives allowed; contact artist for permission
Lyrics
Lauren, sweet baby Lauren       
The whole world’s around you
Now it’s not too late to try

Wishing that you are with me
Now it’s just quite early
You left me away back home

Lauren, sweet baby Lauren
You like to hear music
But you never gave me a chance to sing
Then you told me you were taken
So I had to turn myself away

Lauren, sweet baby Lauren       
The whole world’s around you
Now it’s not too late to try

Chocolate, beautiful vision
Can’t seem to disagree
You’re the only one I want

Lauren, sweet baby Lauren
You like to hear music
But you never gave me a chance to sing
Then you told me you were taken
So I had to turn myself away

Oh, Lauren
So, very, slow
I’ll have to try to leave

Oh, Lauren
So, very, slow
You’ll be my amnesia

Lauren, sweet baby Lauren
I’ve got my whole world around you
Now it’s just too late to try

Wander into your whole life
Just like the beautiful mountains
You stand tall, unopposed at all

Lauren, sweet baby Lauren
You like to hear music
But you never gave me a chance to sing
Then you told me you were taken
So I had to turn myself away

Lauren, sweet baby Lauren
I’ve written you this song
I don’t wanna step over the line
I know that you’re already taken
So I had to go away for good
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artist
Love it at first note. The little instrumental parts are great. Yes, lyrics are a little bit childish but they go well with the music. Love the change around 3'00. Very nice song finally.
Latest song: The Race
6 months ago
artist
Splendid contemporary ballad.  Nothing novel, but everything is there and works perfectly.  The keyboards are excellent.  The vocal is stylish and always in tune.  Nice orchestration on the middle eight.  Bravo!
 
6 months ago
artist
@fan2001 
I really enjoyed this. Lovely piano ballad. Vocal is spot on!
:-)
Latest song: Boys Night Out
6 months ago
I love this song. It is really well written.
The lyrics is the words from a very young man hopelessly in love with a girl that does not love him back. I can remeber that feeling and these words could have been mine back then. It is a talent to be able to write the words that are actually being spoken inside young peoples heads. It is actually hard. All poetry is so adult and overly advanced. This is spot on real world words that you can be proud of.
The whole music arrangement, the performance, the singing.
I would love more of this kind. Bravo. Straight favorite.
6 months ago
artist
Definitely a feeling in the song that rings familiar, at least to me. 
The music is very nice and I like the lyrcs, especially the line "You like to hear music/but you never gave me a chance to sing." That's a great line.
My only nitpick is it ends kind of abruptly, but that's a minor thing. Over all it's a very nice tune. Thanks for sharing.
6 months ago
artist
This is pure brilliance , a super vocal performance of an amazing song 👏👏👏
Latest song: Serenity
6 months ago
artist
@Daugrin @Wyndsok @KennethLavrsen @jgurner @Sprout 
Thank you all for your kind words. I was very hesitant about the reception of this piece, but all of you gave me encouragement and support for my hard work. I really appreciate it!
Best,
fan2001
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