A very good song. Great energy. Very good vocal. Sound is rough. Maybe a tad too lofi for me. A bass, just simple root notes, would make wonders also. Sure a song worth revisiting. It is really well written
Agree with Kenneth. Lots of good stuff here. Love the beefy guitar and great vocals. Gives me an early Jesus & Mary Chain vibe. Some bass and drums would really punch it up.
I like the song, and your voice is one of the best on this site. I don't know whether the intention is to make it sound real LoFi. If you want to polish it up, I'm sure there would be people happy to collaborate.