Like this effort more than the last one. Clean and bright production seems to offer more dimension.
Too much repetition and lack of dynamics for my taste, but here's a suggestion: EQ the synth sounding guitars so the voices are more complimentary. Get rid of everything below 60hz. Make some u shaped cuts at 2 and 200, yer sonic template is what I call middy.
Put your favorite record into an eq au and study the curve in real time. Steal that curve for your production template.
Nice track. Unique and quite cool.. After 2 minutes i miss some development. Some additional instruments - anything. Synth. Acoustic guitar. A flute with deakys. Lots of possibilities for some crazy improv with this really cool foundation.