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The Family Dwindles
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ERWAN (from Wikiloops.com) added some lovely harp and cello to my piece about my brother's celebration of life. It's been a rough few months, but luckily writing helps me to unload my feelings.
Released: 03-Feb-2024
Category: Other
Application: Logic Pro
File type: mp3
File size: 6.1 Mb
Plays: 9
Downloads: 0
Weekly plays: 7
Weekly downloads: 0
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Lyrics
The family dwindles

Once upon a time 
there were eight of us 
crammed into small squares
of tiny space, 
piled on top of one another 
like unruly sacks of wheat.

The hovel seemed
large enough at the time,
with bunkbeds 
three to a bed,
and maybe,
if you were lucky, 
a single bed, 

Until one by one 
we all graduated, 
peeling away from the family
like tired leaves.

Collectively gathering
on required holidays
with each of us 
bringing our own
arsenal of achievements, 
some of us arriving 
empty-handed, 
much to the dismay of our parents.

Gathering now 
as another one of us 
disintegrates and disappears,
each of us left behind
lamenting the loss,
as we stare into caskets 
and pat the urns
looking for something nice to say,

At the same time 
remembering those family squabbles
the uneven give-and-take of siblings 
trying to get their way.

Now there are only 
three of us 
left with old ashes 
and dried memories.

What is left to say as
every year a few more disappear
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artist
How true ... circle of life ... we just lost our Sister! It's reality ... no doubt my turn will soon come! Very reflective piece you created here!
4 months ago
artist
Always love the sound of harp. BTW, is there an issue with your cover picture (space in name?) ? Wow, that cello is awesome. As we get older we have to be prepared to lose those we love.
4 months ago
artist
Pretty no holds barred look at life and the life cycle. The music is very soothing and helps with the message.
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4 months ago
Very beautiful. The harp and cello fits the words perfectly. Beautiful words.
4 months ago
artist
Thank you everyone… This is a sad fact of life, and the circle seems to revolve rapidly as we age… I will fix the photo… I guess it was too large. Thank you for your kind words. We just have to keep going.
artist
This is really beautiful!
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4 months ago
This one really hit home. Thank you for sharing, Mary.
4 months ago
artist
Open mic night at the Lost Poet's Society? Poignant lyrics. A fine reading over a restrained and undistracting musical background. Violin nearly brought me to tears... 👌👍👏🙏
4 months ago
artist
Thank you all for your kind words… I was blown away by Erwin’s thoughtful addition to this piece.
artist
Matter of fact. The violin sounds great. Your speaking voice is nice to listen to, unobtrusive, yet engaging.
4 months ago
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