Love the description. Nice strong beat intro. I love the rhythm instrument. I'd take a little bit of reverb off the voice, get it to be a little more forward and clear, but that's just me. Ya got some personality in your singing. Dig it. Have you thought about writing a bridge for this? I just strummed something out on my guitar. C7 to F7 riff. You could have a little turn around that walks up from G#7 to A7 to A#7 to B7 and then back into the C7 to F7 riff. Could take your time with it too. Just an idea. Enjoyed!
"What do you call that noise that you prolong? THIS IS POP! Yeah, yeah!" - XTC, "This is Pop"
I like the vocal reverb just fine. Suits the track. I especially love the electric piano. Well, that and you should know by now that I am hooked on your voice.
