Thanks everyone! Yeah, the vocals was a spur of the moment thing. Can decide if I like it or not. But I love the feedback from my former iComp friends!
Just listened to version 2. And yes, the advice given were right. V2 is better mixed. But this v1 was already very nice. But we listen more to the words on v2. I admire people that can write lyrics like these. I am not a good poet.